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Misskitz

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Poem Competition?
« on: March 24, 2007, 04:32:34 PM »

I know most of you are fantastic breeders, but are you fantastic poem writers? Here's How it will work: I (Misskitz) will give you a topic (This week is: Chinchillas! Funny things they do, in particular) and you write a poem about it! It won't be scored but we'll read them and have fun! Here's my poem:

         Daisy can twitch her nose,
And balance a raisin on top of her head.
She makes my laugh from my head to my toes!
Daisy loves people; you can call her a “People Chin”
Though you can’t feed her, you’ll get banned.
Daisy will sleep and snore,
But she isn’t bored!
                       Love you Dais!
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Deanna

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Re: Poem Competition?
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2007, 04:57:32 PM »

Otis is a chin
He's 6 months old
He's my pride and joy
And I treat him like gold

He is a male
And a standard grey
I love him already
And I got him today

I ring the food bell
And I say, "Yummy yummy!"
Otis comes running
For food in his tummy

Otis' favorite thing
Never gets in his way
He goes into the tube
For a day full of play

At night I say, "Goodnight!"
And he goes in his bed
And I hope sweet chinchilla dreams
Are running in his head


Luv ya, Otis!!!
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I love Otis!

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Re: Poem Competition?
« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2008, 07:17:29 AM »

Brucey is gone,
He had to leave,
To be with God,
On Christmas Eve.

I was very sad,
On those days to come,
Though sometimes, I swear,
I hear his little hum.

The poor little guy,
Asleep in his box,
Had to leave us,
When the Lord knocked.

We buried him,
By the creek,
And bid him,
A restful sleep.

We are getting a new one,
In almost a week,
I just cannot wait,
To snuggle him to my cheek.

The new one is a baby,
A bright Standard grey,
But I still visit,
The spot where Bruce Lay...


I miss you, buddy! I love you! :'(
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